Quiet Before the Tide

Quiet Before the Tide

Quiet Before the Tide

SARAH’S HOUSE – LOUNGE ROOM – EARLY EVENING

SARAH MARSHALL (35), disheveled but not defeated, irons with

robotic precision.

A cigarette dangles from her lips.

The iron hisses.

Her eyes are hollow but scanning.

The back door creaks open.

DANNY enters, covered in dust, half-panicked, half-proud.

He heads for the pantry, grabs a few supplies.

SARAH'S HOUSE
SCULLERY – CONTINUOUS

Sarah leans on the door, watches Danny.

SARAH

You’re bloody filthy. I hope you’re

not up to mischief.

(MORE)

36.

SARAH (CONT'D)

You’ve been gone all day. That Juba

with you again?

DANNY (O.S.)

Yeah, Mum. We’ve been fishing. Just

grabbing some food.

SARAH

(grumbling, but softer

now)

Your tea is in the oven. Clean up

before you touch anything. And

Danny—

Danny freezes, a jar of peanut butter in one hand.

DANNY

Yeah?

SARAH (O.S.)

News says there’s a storm coming.

Don’t be long.

DANNY

I know that. I got eyes.

Danny sneaks extra supplies into his backpack behind her

back.

SARAH

And for god’s sake, wear clean

underwear. You’re not immortal.

Danny rolls his eyes.

DANNY

Get a life, mum.

SARAH

Watch your bloody tongue!

Danny exits the scullery with a stealthy grin.

TIDAL FLATS
EVENING

SECONDARY IMAGE - TIDAL FLATS.

Juba stalks his way across low-tide sand flats.

In his raised hand is a long spear with a sharp, barbed metal

point.

Attached to his waist is a rope with a gutted fish dangling.

37.

He peers into rock pools, where trapped fish dart about.

Spots a stationary cuttlefish and spears it, quickly guts it

and attaches it to his belt.

He looks out to the rising tide and starts to head back to

land.

He takes one more look into the large pool.

JUBA

(whispers)

There's something in there.

He drops his spear and fish.

Dives into the pool and stands near what he'd seen: a silver

capsule.

It shimmers when he touches it.

JUBA (CONT'D)

Shit!

He exits the pool, gathers his things and runs back to

Diggers Cave at speed.

CHAPTER 9 - REVELATION. IMAGE - REVELATION.

DIGGERS CAVE
DUSK

Blake wakes.

Sees Juba.

Juba offers food and water.

JUBA

I need your help. Found something

strange in the sea.

BLAKE

What kind of strange?

JUBA

Never seen anything like it. We

need to get it before the tide

covers it forever.

Danny arrives, dumps his backpack on the floor.

DANNY

I'm loaded. We can eat for a week.

38.

Blake stands, still weak, leans against the wall for support.

Part of the wall CRUMBLES, revealing the hidden chamber

beyond.

They peer through.

Ancient paintings cover the walls.

JUBA

(awed)

The old stories. It's all true.

Reverently, Danny turns to something on the wall. He traces

his hand over a scrawled, jagged "V".

DANNY

This...

BLAKE

Okay you two. This is getting

creepy. Let's go and get

your...whatever it is from the sea.

OUTSIDE CACTUS LOOP
EVENING

Fleabag cruises across the scrub in his pickup.

He's half hanging out of the window peering at the ground as

he goes.

Close to a rise in the land, he spots a motorbike wheel mark.

He stops, gets out follows the track on foot.

Looks down towards the tidal flats.

There, he sees a group of figures hauling something across

the shallow waters.

FLEABAG

(hoarsely)

Here we go.

Dashes back to his pickup, accelerates closer to the beach.

Hides his vehicle behind a rise.

Grabs his scoped .22 sporting rifle and climbs onto the

pickup's tray.

Looks through the scope and using the cross-member steadies

his aim.

39.

Just as he's about to pull the trigger, Drummer leaps into

the back and affectionately leans into his Fleabag's braced

legs.

The gun goes off.

TIDAL FLATS
EVENING

Using the inflated tires of his trail bike, Blake floats a

makeshift raft into the shallow waters.

Danny and Juba help float it towards the coral reef.

Blake strips his shirt and shorts, stands in his boxers.

He pauses as Juba concentrates on the upcoming tide.

The three of them stand on the coral rim and stare at Juba's

find.

BLAKE

Right, I'm going in.

Grips a nylon rope. Slips into the water.

He takes a deep breath, ducks down, loops the rope under the

cylinder, then surfaces.

BLAKE (CONT'D)

Hold it there, Juba. It'll get

heavy once it's out.

The boys pull as Blake guides the buoyant load.

They roll the cylinder onto the tires and secure it.

As the quickly rising tide moves in, the raft moves with it.

BLAKE (CONT'D)

(grinning at Danny)

Still think it's from outer space?

Might just be a bit of space junk.

DANNY

I've read about stuff like this.

BLAKE

I suppose you're expecting it to

glow or spring open like a cosmic

jack-in-the-box?

40.

DANNY

(touching the cylinder)

It feels like it's alive, mister.

Danny pulls his hand away quickly.

They all laugh when he slips on a sea slug.

SECONDARY IMAGE - SHOOTER

Danny's laugh freezes.

A small ragged hole soundlessly appears on the top of his

arm.

A distant CRACKING sound reaches their ears, followed by a

bullet WHIPPING past, BUZZING before it ricochets off the

cylinder.

DANNY (CONT'D)

(crying out)

Shit!

Danny falls back clutching his arm.

Blake reacts instantly, lunging to push the boy behind the

cylinder.

BLAKE

(urgent)

A shooter. Keep low.

Danny whimpers, feels his own warm blood, then his eyes roll

as he passes out.

Blake examines the wound.

A flesh-wound from a small calibre rifle.

Another round ZINGS past his head and PLOPS into the sea.

Blake rips his shirt into strips and ties the material around

Danny's arm.

The tide continues rising - fast.

BLAKE (CONT'D)

How long for the tide to rise,

Juba?

JUBA

No more than a couple hours. Who's

shooting at us, mister?

41.

BLAKE

Beats me. I'll hold Danny's head

above water. You push the cylinder

ahead for protection. Stay behind

it, keep your head down, move with

the tide's speed. Got it?

Juba nods.

Minutes later, it's dark enough to provide cover from the

shooter.

The wind is increasing.

A full blood moon rises but scudding clouds begin to obscure

it.

They trudge ashore, Danny groans.

They rest against rocks up from the beach.

BLAKE (CONT'D)

Juba, you need to go get Danny's

parents. Are they near here?

JUBA

Danny's mum lives quite near. He

ain't got a dad.

BLAKE

Okay, whatever. Join the club.

We'll wait here. Get going.

DANNY

(hoarse)

My old lady will shit herself.

As Juba vanishes into the waning light, Blake looks at the

mysterious cylinder, then at Danny.

BLAKE

(to himself)

Fuck's sake.

CHAPTER 10 - EMERGENCY. IMAGE - EMERGENCY.

— ⑧

1.

INT. SARAH’S HOUSE – LOUNGE ROOM – EARLY EVENING

SARAH MARSHALL (35), disheveled but not defeated, irons with

robotic precision.

A cigarette dangles from her lips.

The iron hisses.

Her eyes are hollow but scanning.

The back door creaks open.

DANNY enters, covered in dust, half-panicked, half-proud.

He heads for the pantry, grabs a few supplies.

INT. SARAH'S HOUSE - SCULLERY – CONTINUOUS

Sarah leans on the door, watches Danny.

SARAH

You’re bloody filthy. I hope you’re

not up to mischief.

(MORE)

36.

SARAH (CONT'D)

You’ve been gone all day. That Juba

with you again?

DANNY (O.S.)

Yeah, Mum. We’ve been fishing. Just

grabbing some food.

SARAH

(grumbling, but softer

now)

Your tea is in the oven. Clean up

before you touch anything. And

Danny—

Danny freezes, a jar of peanut butter in one hand.

DANNY

Yeah?

SARAH (O.S.)

News says there’s a storm coming.

Don’t be long.

DANNY

I know that. I got eyes.

Danny sneaks extra supplies into his backpack behind her

back.

SARAH

And for god’s sake, wear clean

underwear. You’re not immortal.

Danny rolls his eyes.

DANNY

Get a life, mum.

SARAH

Watch your bloody tongue!

Danny exits the scullery with a stealthy grin.

EXT. TIDAL FLATS - EVENING

SECONDARY IMAGE - TIDAL FLATS.

Juba stalks his way across low-tide sand flats.

In his raised hand is a long spear with a sharp, barbed metal

point.

Attached to his waist is a rope with a gutted fish dangling.

37.

He peers into rock pools, where trapped fish dart about.

Spots a stationary cuttlefish and spears it, quickly guts it

and attaches it to his belt.

He looks out to the rising tide and starts to head back to

land.

He takes one more look into the large pool.

JUBA

(whispers)

There's something in there.

He drops his spear and fish.

Dives into the pool and stands near what he'd seen: a silver

capsule.

It shimmers when he touches it.

JUBA (CONT'D)

Shit!

He exits the pool, gathers his things and runs back to

Diggers Cave at speed.

CHAPTER 9 - REVELATION. IMAGE - REVELATION.

INT. DIGGERS CAVE - DUSK

Blake wakes.

Sees Juba.

Juba offers food and water.

JUBA

I need your help. Found something

strange in the sea.

BLAKE

What kind of strange?

JUBA

Never seen anything like it. We

need to get it before the tide

covers it forever.

Danny arrives, dumps his backpack on the floor.

DANNY

I'm loaded. We can eat for a week.

38.

Blake stands, still weak, leans against the wall for support.

Part of the wall CRUMBLES, revealing the hidden chamber

beyond.

They peer through.

Ancient paintings cover the walls.

JUBA

(awed)

The old stories. It's all true.

Reverently, Danny turns to something on the wall. He traces

his hand over a scrawled, jagged "V".

DANNY

This...

BLAKE

Okay you two. This is getting

creepy. Let's go and get

your...whatever it is from the sea.

EXT. OUTSIDE CACTUS LOOP - EVENING

Fleabag cruises across the scrub in his pickup.

He's half hanging out of the window peering at the ground as

he goes.

Close to a rise in the land, he spots a motorbike wheel mark.

He stops, gets out follows the track on foot.

Looks down towards the tidal flats.

There, he sees a group of figures hauling something across

the shallow waters.

FLEABAG

(hoarsely)

Here we go.

Dashes back to his pickup, accelerates closer to the beach.

Hides his vehicle behind a rise.

Grabs his scoped .22 sporting rifle and climbs onto the

pickup's tray.

Looks through the scope and using the cross-member steadies

his aim.

39.

Just as he's about to pull the trigger, Drummer leaps into

the back and affectionately leans into his Fleabag's braced

legs.

The gun goes off.

EXT. TIDAL FLATS - EVENING

Using the inflated tires of his trail bike, Blake floats a

makeshift raft into the shallow waters.

Danny and Juba help float it towards the coral reef.

Blake strips his shirt and shorts, stands in his boxers.

He pauses as Juba concentrates on the upcoming tide.

The three of them stand on the coral rim and stare at Juba's

find.

BLAKE

Right, I'm going in.

Grips a nylon rope. Slips into the water.

He takes a deep breath, ducks down, loops the rope under the

cylinder, then surfaces.

BLAKE (CONT'D)

Hold it there, Juba. It'll get

heavy once it's out.

The boys pull as Blake guides the buoyant load.

They roll the cylinder onto the tires and secure it.

As the quickly rising tide moves in, the raft moves with it.

BLAKE (CONT'D)

(grinning at Danny)

Still think it's from outer space?

Might just be a bit of space junk.

DANNY

I've read about stuff like this.

BLAKE

I suppose you're expecting it to

glow or spring open like a cosmic

jack-in-the-box?

40.

DANNY

(touching the cylinder)

It feels like it's alive, mister.

Danny pulls his hand away quickly.

They all laugh when he slips on a sea slug.

SECONDARY IMAGE - SHOOTER

Danny's laugh freezes.

A small ragged hole soundlessly appears on the top of his

arm.

A distant CRACKING sound reaches their ears, followed by a

bullet WHIPPING past, BUZZING before it ricochets off the

cylinder.

DANNY (CONT'D)

(crying out)

Shit!

Danny falls back clutching his arm.

Blake reacts instantly, lunging to push the boy behind the

cylinder.

BLAKE

(urgent)

A shooter. Keep low.

Danny whimpers, feels his own warm blood, then his eyes roll

as he passes out.

Blake examines the wound.

A flesh-wound from a small calibre rifle.

Another round ZINGS past his head and PLOPS into the sea.

Blake rips his shirt into strips and ties the material around

Danny's arm.

The tide continues rising - fast.

BLAKE (CONT'D)

How long for the tide to rise,

Juba?

JUBA

No more than a couple hours. Who's

shooting at us, mister?

41.

BLAKE

Beats me. I'll hold Danny's head

above water. You push the cylinder

ahead for protection. Stay behind

it, keep your head down, move with

the tide's speed. Got it?

Juba nods.

Minutes later, it's dark enough to provide cover from the

shooter.

The wind is increasing.

A full blood moon rises but scudding clouds begin to obscure

it.

They trudge ashore, Danny groans.

They rest against rocks up from the beach.

BLAKE (CONT'D)

Juba, you need to go get Danny's

parents. Are they near here?

JUBA

Danny's mum lives quite near. He

ain't got a dad.

BLAKE

Okay, whatever. Join the club.

We'll wait here. Get going.

DANNY

(hoarse)

My old lady will shit herself.

As Juba vanishes into the waning light, Blake looks at the

mysterious cylinder, then at Danny.

BLAKE

(to himself)

Fuck's sake.

CHAPTER 10 - EMERGENCY. IMAGE - EMERGENCY.