Bearded monk and the girl, now clean and neat walk side by
side. The girl has a large belly.
Some MONKS cross their way. They mimic cartoonish "go away!"
LADY HOST (V.O.)
(narrating)
As this was strictly against the
rules, when the other monks found
out, he and his family were
expelled from the monastery. In
return he casted a curse upon the
monastery that no one can find his
way to it ever again.
Bearded monk tears off his robe and naked along the naked
girl mimics a wild man, both running into the woods.
By this time no one actually does anything but carefully
listens to the story transfixed.
JACK
(dead serious)
But...people visit it regularly?
Male hosts burst into LAUGHTER.
GRUMPY
Just a story, man!
LORA
(hooked)
So sad...what happened to the baby?
Jack gives her "we just ate a bunch of onions" look.
GOOFY
Who knows? Just a strange story,
It's not real probably.
JACK
As I have said, it goes with the
castle.
IVAN
We are planning on taking a minibus
route. Can you advise any better?
GRUMPY
No, bus is best. Now, you can go
all the way, but there is much walk
or driver can leave you half way on
place called Studencista and from
there on you can climb on foot. It
is harder to go, but quicker.
JACK
If it is off the maps, I don't
know...
IVAN
We will take it in consideration,
thanks.
GOOFY
Trinity is a great place. You will
find much peace there.
JACK
Well...let's raise a toast to it.
They all raise glasses together.
Jack, Lora, and Ivan linger together through a half-dark,
empty alley.
Booze has taken its toll on Jack and Lora but Ivan hangs on
straight...or at least pretends to have things under
control.
Lora's heels pierce the late hour emptiness. Although
half-drunk, she is a lioness in motion.
JACK
(loud)
Did you see that? Did you see, my
friend?
(leaning to Lora)
We've got beaten up square by this
broad!
Makes an attempt to kiss her, but Lora dodges him.
LORA
You better work on that velocity of
yours.
JACK
Now, that's a true libra talk!
Hitting on her again.
JACK (CONT'D)
C'mon baby...
Lora pushes him away. Jack's irritated as much as he's
drunk.
JACK (CONT'D)
Yea? So self-assured, but were
whining back there over the baby
story...
(imitating host's bad
English)
And the b a b y was homeless and
crying...
LORA
Such a fucking asshole, darling.
Jack takes a bow.
IVAN
Hey! I thought this was a
relationship healing vacation.
JACK
Well, I'm doing my best,
buddy...she just got all over these
babies...
LORA
Maybe I want one?
JACK
(much more sober)
Maybe fuck you!
Lora turns to Ivan "you see".
JACK (CONT'D)
Hey, I'm not the bad guy
here...just tonight this talk
interferes with r a k i a too
much...
MALE VOICE coming aside interrupts Jack.
MALE VOICE (O.S.)
(bad English)
Hey! Pretty girl! Come have fun?
All three of them throw their focus in that direction.
A GANG of 5-6 YOUNG ADULTS upon them. They all look horny
for fun and fighting.
Almost without hesitation, Jack engages them.
JACK
No man, fun is over for us.
One of the gang is ALPHA MALE. Steps out of the bunch.
ALPHA
I was not talking to you.
(focus on Lora)
Girl so pretty, must like fun, a?
Ivan closely monitors the situation.
Lora taken aback, sober to the bone.
JACK
Nah, she doesn't like either...
ALPHA
Maybe I stick you to the wall
here...fuck her in front of
you...you have fun too then?
Jack comes closer.
JACK
What did you say?
Alpha swears something in his native language. Jack doesn't
react to it.
Ivan recognizes the threat. Takes initiative.
IVAN
Vo red! Vo red! Here...you want
fun, this buy you lot of fun.
Takes couple of dollar bills outta his pocked and hands over
to the Alpha.
IVAN (CONT'D)
Lot of money, lot of girls, no just
one, ok?
Alpha's considering the bargain. Turns to his gang - they
exchange some native talk.
All smile.
ALPHA
(to Ivan)
You buy your luck tonight.
Alpha grabs the money from Ivan. Goes back to his gang.
They all vanish into the night.
The trio stays motionless until the gang vanishes completely
outta their sight. Then Jack furiously turns to Ivan.
JACK
Way to go dude! You've just paid
your sisters dignity!
Ivan moves closer to Jack.
IVAN
No, I paid to cover your fucking
ass. At least three of them were
packing knifes.
Jack goes right into Ivan's face.
JACK
How would you know, huh? Some
fucking GI sixth sense?
LORA
Jack! Stop it!
Moment of glare eye-to-eye. Pure masculine ego-pump.
IVAN
I saw them...in their hands. Wanna
go to conflict, gotta watch your
grounds...
LORA
Ivan, please...
Ivan backs down. This guy is freaking Yoda at self-control.
They all get a grip, walk themselves outta the scene.
A cosy, small place, tucked perfectly among the big
buildings around.
Ivan, stripped down to his underwear, and sat on his bed
looking at the large road map in front of him.
A KNOCK on the door.
IVAN
Yes?
Lora enters the room. She is much more sober now, much more
politely looking.
LORA
Still not asleep? Gotta catch some
rest, big day tomorrow.
IVAN
Why are you still awake?
LORA
Still gathering... after what
happened tonight.
IVAN
How's Jack?
LORA
Ah, had a few pukes, dead asleep
now...
Ivan's attention is back to the map.
IVAN
Gotta watch yourself of such
bozo's...
LORA
What? C'mon you'll be my parents
now?
IVAN
I am your family...Just
saying...you need someone firm...
LORA
Well, actually you're the one
chickened out tonight.
IVAN
I meant firm...as in relationship.
LORA
Jack's ok. You just haven't met him
the right way.
IVAN
(pointing at the map)
Guy at the tavern was right. There
is a half-way passage at this
place.
(beat)
We could save a couple of hours
taking the route.
LORA
Not sure...what If we get lost?
IVAN
It is not off road. Its marked on
the map Christ sakes...
LORA
Well I guess...talk tomorrow, ok?
She's hesitant to leave. Ivan notices this.
IVAN
Something you wanna talk?
Lora comes back, sits next to Ivan. She looks at him
profoundly. A single tear stream through her cheek.
LORA
Ever since we were little after mom
and dad...died...I found this
strong feeling of...dependance of
you.
(beat)
Not only as an older brother, but
a...protector 'some ways.
(beat)
Then you went away...to serve,
I...for the first time in my life I
felt totally vulnerable...Never
really missed anyone 'till then.
IVAN
We've had comms...send you all
those tapes...
LORA
On how to handle weapons?
(smiles)
C'mon...sure that was all I needed
in my life...
Ivan squeezes her next to him. He listens trying to feel.
LORA (CONT'D)
I called you on this trip. Never
wanna feel that again.
IVAN
I know...
LORA
I hope you do. Earlier, tonight
when those idiots...
IVAN
C'mon let it go...
LORA
No!
(beat)
When they...approached and said
those stuff...I imagined them
suffer tortured. I wasn't
scared...I was angry...
(beat)
And then you...paid them...
IVAN
Lora...
LORA
You sold my...impression of you...
IVAN
C'mon, fuck! What was I supposed to
do? Get killed fighting them?
Pushes her away. Stands up.
LORA
You were supposed to be big a
brother...
IVAN
And I was. I resolved it no
casualties.
(beat)
I hear this shit all along since I
have come back from the route. But
guess what. Most people don't know
what violence really is.
(beat)
You know what? You were angry
because you were scared. You were
scared shitless, so was Jack.
(beat)
I know it's a lousy feeling, but
I'am not the one to blame, ok?
Lora stand up and wipes her face.
IVAN (CONT'D)
It's pretty late. We should be
getting to sleep.
LORA
Yes...I guess so.
Lora turns to exit.
IVAN
Lori, this does not have to be the
end. I'm still your big brother.
(beat)
I will find the way to make it up.
Lora nods. Exits the room quietly.
— ②
EXT. MONASTERY COMPOUND - FLASHBACK
Bearded monk and the girl, now clean and neat walk side by
side. The girl has a large belly.
Some MONKS cross their way. They mimic cartoonish "go away!"
LADY HOST (V.O.)
(narrating)
As this was strictly against the
rules, when the other monks found
out, he and his family were
expelled from the monastery. In
return he casted a curse upon the
monastery that no one can find his
way to it ever again.
EXT. MONASTERY GATES - FLASHBACK
Bearded monk tears off his robe and naked along the naked
girl mimics a wild man, both running into the woods.
EXT. CITY BAZAAR - BACK TO NOW
By this time no one actually does anything but carefully
listens to the story transfixed.
JACK
(dead serious)
But...people visit it regularly?
Male hosts burst into LAUGHTER.
GRUMPY
Just a story, man!
LORA
(hooked)
So sad...what happened to the baby?
Jack gives her "we just ate a bunch of onions" look.
GOOFY
Who knows? Just a strange story,
It's not real probably.
JACK
As I have said, it goes with the
castle.
IVAN
We are planning on taking a minibus
route. Can you advise any better?
GRUMPY
No, bus is best. Now, you can go
all the way, but there is much walk
or driver can leave you half way on
place called Studencista and from
there on you can climb on foot. It
is harder to go, but quicker.
JACK
If it is off the maps, I don't
know...
IVAN
We will take it in consideration,
thanks.
GOOFY
Trinity is a great place. You will
find much peace there.
JACK
Well...let's raise a toast to it.
They all raise glasses together.
EXT. BAZAAR ALLEY - LATER ON
Jack, Lora, and Ivan linger together through a half-dark,
empty alley.
Booze has taken its toll on Jack and Lora but Ivan hangs on
straight...or at least pretends to have things under
control.
Lora's heels pierce the late hour emptiness. Although
half-drunk, she is a lioness in motion.
JACK
(loud)
Did you see that? Did you see, my
friend?
(leaning to Lora)
We've got beaten up square by this
broad!
Makes an attempt to kiss her, but Lora dodges him.
LORA
You better work on that velocity of
yours.
JACK
Now, that's a true libra talk!
Hitting on her again.
JACK (CONT'D)
C'mon baby...
Lora pushes him away. Jack's irritated as much as he's
drunk.
JACK (CONT'D)
Yea? So self-assured, but were
whining back there over the baby
story...
(imitating host's bad
English)
And the b a b y was homeless and
crying...
LORA
Such a fucking asshole, darling.
Jack takes a bow.
IVAN
Hey! I thought this was a
relationship healing vacation.
JACK
Well, I'm doing my best,
buddy...she just got all over these
babies...
LORA
Maybe I want one?
JACK
(much more sober)
Maybe fuck you!
Lora turns to Ivan "you see".
JACK (CONT'D)
Hey, I'm not the bad guy
here...just tonight this talk
interferes with r a k i a too
much...
MALE VOICE coming aside interrupts Jack.
MALE VOICE (O.S.)
(bad English)
Hey! Pretty girl! Come have fun?
All three of them throw their focus in that direction.
A GANG of 5-6 YOUNG ADULTS upon them. They all look horny
for fun and fighting.
Almost without hesitation, Jack engages them.
JACK
No man, fun is over for us.
One of the gang is ALPHA MALE. Steps out of the bunch.
ALPHA
I was not talking to you.
(focus on Lora)
Girl so pretty, must like fun, a?
Ivan closely monitors the situation.
Lora taken aback, sober to the bone.
JACK
Nah, she doesn't like either...
ALPHA
Maybe I stick you to the wall
here...fuck her in front of
you...you have fun too then?
Jack comes closer.
JACK
What did you say?
Alpha swears something in his native language. Jack doesn't
react to it.
Ivan recognizes the threat. Takes initiative.
IVAN
Vo red! Vo red! Here...you want
fun, this buy you lot of fun.
Takes couple of dollar bills outta his pocked and hands over
to the Alpha.
IVAN (CONT'D)
Lot of money, lot of girls, no just
one, ok?
Alpha's considering the bargain. Turns to his gang - they
exchange some native talk.
All smile.
ALPHA
(to Ivan)
You buy your luck tonight.
Alpha grabs the money from Ivan. Goes back to his gang.
They all vanish into the night.
The trio stays motionless until the gang vanishes completely
outta their sight. Then Jack furiously turns to Ivan.
JACK
Way to go dude! You've just paid
your sisters dignity!
Ivan moves closer to Jack.
IVAN
No, I paid to cover your fucking
ass. At least three of them were
packing knifes.
Jack goes right into Ivan's face.
JACK
How would you know, huh? Some
fucking GI sixth sense?
LORA
Jack! Stop it!
Moment of glare eye-to-eye. Pure masculine ego-pump.
IVAN
I saw them...in their hands. Wanna
go to conflict, gotta watch your
grounds...
LORA
Ivan, please...
Ivan backs down. This guy is freaking Yoda at self-control.
They all get a grip, walk themselves outta the scene.
EXT. MOTEL - LATER
A cosy, small place, tucked perfectly among the big
buildings around.
INT. IVAN'S ROOM - CONTINUES
Ivan, stripped down to his underwear, and sat on his bed
looking at the large road map in front of him.
A KNOCK on the door.
IVAN
Yes?
Lora enters the room. She is much more sober now, much more
politely looking.
LORA
Still not asleep? Gotta catch some
rest, big day tomorrow.
IVAN
Why are you still awake?
LORA
Still gathering... after what
happened tonight.
IVAN
How's Jack?
LORA
Ah, had a few pukes, dead asleep
now...
Ivan's attention is back to the map.
IVAN
Gotta watch yourself of such
bozo's...
LORA
What? C'mon you'll be my parents
now?
IVAN
I am your family...Just
saying...you need someone firm...
LORA
Well, actually you're the one
chickened out tonight.
IVAN
I meant firm...as in relationship.
LORA
Jack's ok. You just haven't met him
the right way.
IVAN
(pointing at the map)
Guy at the tavern was right. There
is a half-way passage at this
place.
(beat)
We could save a couple of hours
taking the route.
LORA
Not sure...what If we get lost?
IVAN
It is not off road. Its marked on
the map Christ sakes...
LORA
Well I guess...talk tomorrow, ok?
She's hesitant to leave. Ivan notices this.
IVAN
Something you wanna talk?
Lora comes back, sits next to Ivan. She looks at him
profoundly. A single tear stream through her cheek.
LORA
Ever since we were little after mom
and dad...died...I found this
strong feeling of...dependance of
you.
(beat)
Not only as an older brother, but
a...protector 'some ways.
(beat)
Then you went away...to serve,
I...for the first time in my life I
felt totally vulnerable...Never
really missed anyone 'till then.
IVAN
We've had comms...send you all
those tapes...
LORA
On how to handle weapons?
(smiles)
C'mon...sure that was all I needed
in my life...
Ivan squeezes her next to him. He listens trying to feel.
LORA (CONT'D)
I called you on this trip. Never
wanna feel that again.
IVAN
I know...
LORA
I hope you do. Earlier, tonight
when those idiots...
IVAN
C'mon let it go...
LORA
No!
(beat)
When they...approached and said
those stuff...I imagined them
suffer tortured. I wasn't
scared...I was angry...
(beat)
And then you...paid them...
IVAN
Lora...
LORA
You sold my...impression of you...
IVAN
C'mon, fuck! What was I supposed to
do? Get killed fighting them?
Pushes her away. Stands up.
LORA
You were supposed to be big a
brother...
IVAN
And I was. I resolved it no
casualties.
(beat)
I hear this shit all along since I
have come back from the route. But
guess what. Most people don't know
what violence really is.
(beat)
You know what? You were angry
because you were scared. You were
scared shitless, so was Jack.
(beat)
I know it's a lousy feeling, but
I'am not the one to blame, ok?
Lora stand up and wipes her face.
IVAN (CONT'D)
It's pretty late. We should be
getting to sleep.
LORA
Yes...I guess so.
Lora turns to exit.
IVAN
Lori, this does not have to be the
end. I'm still your big brother.
(beat)
I will find the way to make it up.
Lora nods. Exits the room quietly.




